YOU, it reminds me of you
You being my centre of attention.
You occupying my thoughts
My silent prayers for your well-being
A peek through the parted curtain
A buzz on the IM
The little jokes you cracked
The little wishes you wished for ‘Us’
The Cancer-Libra incompatibility
The acceptance of the silent indifference
The long no-non-sense talks
The after-perturbation hangovers
Your sudden mood swings
The frustrations, the tears
The sudden love-blurts, the fears
Your constant illness
My only crush, your only love
Your diamond for tears
Realization of your absence
As the eyes fill up and the hands retard
The fact that you were mine once
But will never be mine again,
Reminds me of you…
14 comments:
This is very much prose-like. I do not know whether that is the intention here. But, the feel is real. And, that is good. Keep writing!!!
nice work.. i mean each line had something or the other that felt soo right
jst going thru a bad patch..feeling like drenched?more depressed?feeling like telling the whole world whts going inside ur world?..bt u cant..hold on..gradually u wll get used with dis staffs..dnt try 2 escape frm memories..try 2 be with it..be firm..abbbee yaar...dusra koi e mil jaega..ussebhi handsum..:)..
@ Brosereview
Thanxx dude ;)
@ AB
Thanx for visiting my blog and welcome to my world.
And thanxx for commenting.
Glad that you liked it. :)
Do keep visiting. :)
@ Moon
Thanxx for visiting and commenting here. welcome to my blog.
I am sorry, but I really don't want any-thing-or-any-body-else.
Thank you. bye. :)
sigh!!!! that was beautiful!!!
every word held its own...d feelings...those lil tingles..everythin expresses so beautifully
Hi!
Just came across your blog. Your About me is very interesting :D Shattered Spirit ?? hehe ! You have a nice blog! Loved your blog. Great poem. I love reading stuff like this :)
Take Care!
I get the emotion and its really well expressed...believe me I understand..but someday it'll seem better...not gone but almost gone.
@ Mayz
Lo! mayz Again :)
Thankxx a ton :)
@ Cursed
Welcome to my blog dear :)
Thanks for visiting and commenting. :)
Glad to know you loved it. will be visiting your blog soon. do keep visiting.
Bye. :)
@ Ak
Just don't know what the future holds.
Nevertheless, thanks for visiting and commenting. :)
luvly post diya, not cos of the words which made it, but cos of the emotions which weaved it.
@ Sawan
I am truly very glad that you understood the emotions :)
You just got it right, my intentions.
Thanxx for visiting and commenting, Welcome to my Blog. :)
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