Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.

Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.
I'm not a perfect person, But I never meant to do those things; And so I have to say before I go, That I just want myself to know. I've found out a reason for me,; To change who I used to be A reason to start over new, and the reason is you. I've found a reason to show, A side of me you didn't know; A reason for all that I do, Before I let you go...

Monday, May 18, 2009

Is it my You?


Twisting and turning

Sleepless in bed

As the night mocks past

The haunting hours

You creep by me

As I fight over darkness

 

Sweet memories undaunted linger

As molten dreams rain unhindered

Solace had your return been

When I rejoiced unseen

But you… was it you?

“My same you?”

 

You laughed, you talked

But my caresses, you recognized them not.

You were immersed in yourself

Me but some anonymous creature

You cared not to care

But you… was it you?

“My same you?”

 

The same eyes

The same lips, your brows

As they rose in frown

The large hands, the mole

Everything is you

But you… was it you?

“My same you?”

 

I am sore, I am through

Through with identifying you

It is you, my same you

The one before I lost you

I missed you

Now… it is you?

“My same you?”

 

But you are hers

How can you be my you?

You are you

But you are hers

You forsook me

You are hers

You are ‘you’

“But… you are not my “You”!”

  

  Sorry for sounding so low of late. I was not well for a few days contineously, guess that took a toll on my thoughts. Thanks for staying by me. I dint know that I had so many good friends by me! Thank you very much. :)

Please do read and comment on my efforts if you find this post popping up anywhere near you :P

22 comments:

Brosreview said...

Nicely done! Short phrases jumbled together to deliver a lot. Keep writing!!!

The Pink Orchid said...

it had soooooooo much in it.. i didnt know you write soooooo well!!

Chronicwriter said...

u r on the right track on the success lane

chriz

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

I loved it diya....

especially those 2 lines which accompanied each stanza...:)

Illeen said...

Nice lines..the pain comes across.

sawan said...

hw are ya now grl??
dnt feel low, alrite? maybe these insecurities in words are just gifts of imaginations.. u wud be fine.. take care..

Keshi said...

Well written!

The YOU that we hold on to so tightly in others is sometimes not the real THEM. We paint a picture of someone the way we want, and then we get disappointed. Im speaking with experience :)

Keshi.

Pallav said...

hi..
i loved it.. i mean it..
simply loved it

"But you… was it you?
“My same you?”
these lines r so best..

Hope u r well nw...

do tk cr...
Cheers:)

Pallav

droL said...

hello, Diya!

Thank you so much for the prayers!

I am feeling way better now and can do much more things now than earlier.

Though I am still recuperating, I guess it won't harm my recovery if I resume writing poems.

I like this poetry of yours, and at some points in my life I've been through those times you've depicted here.

Hugs!

Diya said...

@ Brosereview
Coming from you, thats great to hear. :)
Thankxx :)

Diya said...

@ Pink Orchid
Ha ha, thats great to hear even.
Nevertheless Thanxx, do keep visiting :)

Diya said...

@ Chriz
Huh!! Ha ha, would you clarify that please? ;)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Anubhav
Glad that you liked it dear:)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ IIIeen
Hey, welcome to my blog :)
Thanxx for visiting and commenting :)
Will be visiting yours soon. :)

Diya said...

@ Sawan
Hey, Thanx for visiting. I am better. :)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Keshi
Thats very true, too very you made me realize that! Itz in our world of dreams that our YOU is their and not in THEM! We just try to idealize them and get hurt.
Nevertheless, How are you dear?
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Pallav
Thanxx for being so regular in your comments on my efforts. :)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Drol
Yeah, please resume... Looking forward to them :)
And did you really need to thank? Cant a friend do that for another friend? Im angry. :X
Nevertheless, glad that you are well and recovering back to health now. Hope you are well soon. :)
Thanxx :)

Walker said...

The other side of midnight has its own shadows

muthu said...

I loved the first four paras.... lovely
poignan
crisp and had pain painted.

but really i thought that the ending was abrupt and could have had more depth.

thats jus me.

and hey It my first time here. Nice blog you have. will sure visit again.



muthu
www.average-everyday.blogspot.com

Diya said...

@ Walker
Gotcha. Yeah, it has, and they are always painful on the other side of the shining coin.
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Muthu
Hey, welcome to my blog. :)
Thanxx for visiting and commenting. :)
Well, glad that you liked it. But how do you suggest the ending should have been better, I would definitely like to have your take on the issue. it is just you, but indeed everyones views does matter to me. Please put them forward :)
Please do visit, I would love that. Will visit your blog soon.
Cheers :)
Thanxx :)