Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.

Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.
I'm not a perfect person, But I never meant to do those things; And so I have to say before I go, That I just want myself to know. I've found out a reason for me,; To change who I used to be A reason to start over new, and the reason is you. I've found a reason to show, A side of me you didn't know; A reason for all that I do, Before I let you go...

Monday, May 11, 2009

Anticipating memories...


It is tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow…

As dwelling anticipation refuse to admit rout,

As the sweet memories of bygone dawn upon…

It has been long since you touched

The sacred holy heart tingling presence,

Now long since awaited for, pined without

Yearned for more as days slip past count…

Sweet memories stare bleak

As I stare at the now un trodden way

Once sprigged with the flowers of desire,

Saw it, felt it, loved it… no more is it now.

Though hopes refuse to fling the curse

The eyes bore to stare at the once cherished path.

As the thrush chants on its loveless song.

It is bygone and bygone and bygone…

 

 





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22 comments:

Brosreview said...

I liked this. It took a while for me to let it sink in as I felt the disconnection on many occasions. If I'd not read it more than just twice, I'd have complained of it. But, frankly, it goes well with the message and the mood. Liked the way you've ended it as supposed to the way you've begun it. Great job!!! Keep writing!!!

Pallav said...

hi..
u knw...
it took almost 20 minutes to understand the exact meaning...

beautiful piece...
clear message n transition of expressions.. kept me reading further n further...

Pallav

THE PHANTOM OF THE OPERA said...

two words :beautiful,powerful

Chronicwriter said...

kaiku ettunadhu vaaiku ettalaiyaa?

vandhuttu poyiduchaaaa?

deep thoughts

good

chriz

Diya said...

@ Brosereview
Coming from you itz a great compliment :)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Pallav
Glad you liked it. Thankxx :)

Diya said...

@ Abhik
That was short and sweet :)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Chriz
Phir se Tamil...???? Mummmy..! :(
Nevertheless, kucch toh eng tha, thank God..! :P
Thanxx :)

Cursed♪♫ said...

Took me sometime to get to the exact meaning. But it's lovely.
Saw it, felt it, loved it… no more is it now. - Loved this line. Relates so much to me.
Also, amazing pik. If my piano was in a place like that, I would play it for hours :)
Take care!

Walker said...

Very nice post

Tomorrow never comes and yesterday is but a dream.
Today we live, love and die because it's always today when we are awake.

Diya said...

@ Cursed
Thanxx for liking it sis. Glad that you could relate to it. :)
Ha ha... you would have played the piano all throughout the day... eh? :P I myself liked the pic very much. :)
Thanxx. :)

Diya said...

@ Walked
Wonderful lines.

"Today is the night of the dream
That dawned yesterday
And will be inexistent tomorrow..."

Thanxx :)

Amal Bose said...

loved it.. it was beautiful..
very deep and wonderful... :)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Was that english or its baap..?

I dont the meaning of many words in it...dekhna pada..then samjha ki ...kya hai aur kyu hai,.....

Very beautiful poem.... Sachi....muchchi..... :)

Likhte raho... :)

Kido said...

Profound :) Very well written :)

Commenting is an individual approach towards propelling a mass work initiative...! :P LOL True, though :)

The Pink Orchid said...

intense poetry.. :) glad you liked the award.. please put it up here along with 'i am coz you are' and ' thanks for the sweet comments' awards as well..:D

Diya said...

@ AB
So very glad that you liked it, :)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Anubhav
I just couldent stop laughing after reading your comment ha ha :P
Sachi muchchi Thank you sooo much :)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Kido
Welcome to my blog :)
Thanxx for visiting and commenting :)
Glad that you liked it.
He he, don't you think that is true : :)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Kajal
Hey thank you so much for dropping by, following my blog and for the awards. :)
You rock :)
Thanxx. :)

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plzz visit http://outsourcing-thoughts.blogspot.com/
and :) its all there for you to follow :) cheerz :)

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