Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.

Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.
I'm not a perfect person, But I never meant to do those things; And so I have to say before I go, That I just want myself to know. I've found out a reason for me,; To change who I used to be A reason to start over new, and the reason is you. I've found a reason to show, A side of me you didn't know; A reason for all that I do, Before I let you go...

Saturday, May 2, 2009

You. A.


YOU, it reminds me of you

You being my centre of attention.

You occupying my thoughts

My silent prayers for your well-being

A peek through the parted curtain

A buzz on the IM

The little jokes you cracked

The little wishes you wished for ‘Us’

The Cancer-Libra incompatibility

The acceptance of the silent indifference

The long no-non-sense talks

The after-perturbation hangovers

Your sudden mood swings

The frustrations, the tears

The sudden love-blurts, the fears

Your constant illness

My only crush, your only love

Your diamond for tears

Realization of your absence

As the eyes fill up and the hands retard

The fact that you were mine once

But will never be mine again,

 

Reminds me of you…





Please do read and comment on my efforts if you find this post popping up anywhere near you :P

14 comments:

Brosreview said...

This is very much prose-like. I do not know whether that is the intention here. But, the feel is real. And, that is good. Keep writing!!!

Amal Bose said...

nice work.. i mean each line had something or the other that felt soo right

moon said...

jst going thru a bad patch..feeling like drenched?more depressed?feeling like telling the whole world whts going inside ur world?..bt u cant..hold on..gradually u wll get used with dis staffs..dnt try 2 escape frm memories..try 2 be with it..be firm..abbbee yaar...dusra koi e mil jaega..ussebhi handsum..:)..

Diya said...

@ Brosereview
Thanxx dude ;)

Diya said...

@ AB
Thanx for visiting my blog and welcome to my world.
And thanxx for commenting.
Glad that you liked it. :)
Do keep visiting. :)

Diya said...

@ Moon
Thanxx for visiting and commenting here. welcome to my blog.
I am sorry, but I really don't want any-thing-or-any-body-else.
Thank you. bye. :)

Mayz said...

sigh!!!! that was beautiful!!!

every word held its own...d feelings...those lil tingles..everythin expresses so beautifully

Cursed♪♫ said...

Hi!
Just came across your blog. Your About me is very interesting :D Shattered Spirit ?? hehe ! You have a nice blog! Loved your blog. Great poem. I love reading stuff like this :)
Take Care!

Akshaya Kamalnath said...

I get the emotion and its really well expressed...believe me I understand..but someday it'll seem better...not gone but almost gone.

Diya said...

@ Mayz
Lo! mayz Again :)
Thankxx a ton :)

Diya said...

@ Cursed
Welcome to my blog dear :)
Thanks for visiting and commenting. :)
Glad to know you loved it. will be visiting your blog soon. do keep visiting.
Bye. :)

Diya said...

@ Ak
Just don't know what the future holds.
Nevertheless, thanks for visiting and commenting. :)

sawan said...

luvly post diya, not cos of the words which made it, but cos of the emotions which weaved it.

Diya said...

@ Sawan
I am truly very glad that you understood the emotions :)
You just got it right, my intentions.
Thanxx for visiting and commenting, Welcome to my Blog. :)