Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.

Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.
I'm not a perfect person, But I never meant to do those things; And so I have to say before I go, That I just want myself to know. I've found out a reason for me,; To change who I used to be A reason to start over new, and the reason is you. I've found a reason to show, A side of me you didn't know; A reason for all that I do, Before I let you go...

Sunday, May 24, 2009

You made 'Yourself' terribly memorable!


It is nothing else

Just that you are not being yourself.

You are dismissive

You are distancing yourself,

Our words move you a lot;

Then why do you feign coldness?

 

Why can’t you just be you?

Our humor device

The place to vent out in distress,

Where are you going?

Someplace where you lost yourself?

Treading the paths you loathed.

 

Hate me, I just don’t care.

But refrain from hating yourself;

I indeed care for that.

I remember you in your typical stands

I considered you in you classy change

I saw you endure through wind and rain.

 

Now you try distancing yourself

Think you I won’t get a wisp,

You remember your thoughts dear?

The times when I mocked your dress?

Smiled at your funny crush?

And called you up on a hasty yen?

 

Having reduced your presence to a laugh,

You mock me to my depth…

Come back dear to the isolated pastures

The places you made terribly memorable

We miss you awfully often

Only if you knew that even!

 

 2.21am, 24th May.

 This is intended for a close friend of mine who has no quite been his own self. Please come back as your own cheery self is all I pray L

Please do read and comment on my efforts if you find this post popping up anywhere near you :P

26 comments:

sawan said...

beautiful dedication. hope ur friend takes the msg. god bless you both.

Brosreview said...

It's very personal. And, that's what makes it sweet.

However, there are quite a few grammatical mistakes and incorrect usages that might curb one's understanding. Bear that in mind. I recall writing that to you in the past.

Good luck!

Cяystal said...

Before I give you my opinion on your poem..I like the way the comments are presented on your blog.."3 dissected it" =D..
You can have the words slightly better framed, right?..but anyway, I liked the feeling carried out by the poem!..anger,sadness..all mixed into one.
Good work!

The Pink Orchid said...

it was a lovely dedication...simple and straight from the heart..

Mayz said...

thr is smthn for ya on my blog :)

john said...

wat font is this?

Diya said...

@ Sawan
I too hope.
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Brosereview
ummm... can you please tell me exactly where? Thankxx for correcting me again. :)
Thankxxx :)

Diya said...

@ Crystal
Hey, thank you so mucch for visiting da. Glad that you like it, and I will try to improve.
Thanxx. :)

Diya said...

@ Kajal
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Mayz
Hey thankxx for those. :)

Diya said...

@ John
Poor Richard.
Thanxx :)

akanksha said...

Nice poetry kiddo:)
Hope your friend gets the message!
Keep Writing!

Diya said...

@ Akanksha
Thankxx, I too hope he does. :)
Thanxx for visiting and commenting, and welcome to my blog. :)
Do keep visiting. :)

THE PHANTOM OF THE OPERA said...

very nice and very sweet...a few grammatical errors (sorry for pointing it out :) ) but they are acceptable considering the purity of the message you want to send across :) a very touching post :)

Walker said...

I can feel your frustration and desire.

Chriz said...

give him a kick on his rear side.. he will be alright.. if he is emotionally down, let him alone for sometime..

Keshi said...

beautiful poem!

I hope ur friend comes back to his cheerful self again soon. Sometimes it happens with all of us...we lose our funny bone or happyness or whatever...but time heals.

TC
Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

beautiful post for ur friend ..:)...it was nicely worded :)..

urs..hemu..

comfortably numb said...

ur post reminded me of these lines 4m an old Sonu song

"Mujhse naraaz ho to ho jao
Khud se lekin khafa khafa na raho
Mujhko tum bhool jao to jao
Aap apne se par juda na raho"
Hope ur friend gets back to normal soon:)

Diya said...

@ Abhik
Thankxx dude, nd I would like to know the errors :)
Thankxx once again. :)

Diya said...

@ Walker
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Chriz
Hey, Thankxx for the suggestion, he he, That was a nice one :P
But he z a bit senior to me, and kicking will pose a prob :(
Thankxx :)

Diya said...

@ keshi
Hope ur all right :)
Thankxx :)

Diya said...

@ Hemu
Thankxx dude :)

Diya said...

@ Comfortably numb
Hey, welcome to my blog and thankxx for visiting and commenting :)
Hope he does, and those were beautiful lines. :)
Thankxx :)