Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.

Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.
I'm not a perfect person, But I never meant to do those things; And so I have to say before I go, That I just want myself to know. I've found out a reason for me,; To change who I used to be A reason to start over new, and the reason is you. I've found a reason to show, A side of me you didn't know; A reason for all that I do, Before I let you go...

Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Atrocious you.


It was a delightful day love

You woke me up to the sun

Everything around was beautiful

But the dark cloud sustained.

 

Love and mutterings

You tinted it all,

An illicit fruit it had been to me

Cherished it became then.

 

Memories and memories you left me to.

It has been long since the colors paled

I saw them dilute in splotches

In saturated saline beads.

 

They drained you away, My life

Dreams ushered into reality.

Never had my world been so beautiful,

Never had I imagined it so ghastly.




Please do read and comment on my efforts if you find this post popping up anywhere near you :P

22 comments:

Brosreview said...

Quite poetic, this one. Good job!!!

Keshi said...

WOW Diya how d u write like this?


**I saw them dilute in splotches
In saturated saline beads.

Just awesome!


Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

very nice write up diya :)...awesome expressions..

urs..hemu..

Diya said...

@ Brosereview
Thankxx :X :)

Diya said...

@ Keshi
Glad that you liked it :)
Thankx :)

Diya said...

@ Hemu
Thanxx :)

Arnab Majumdar said...

Wonderfully written, painted quite a picture in my head... cheers...

Diya said...

@ Arnab
ha ha, I have become quite a painter, isnt it? lol
Thanxx :)

Pallav said...

"Love and mutterings
You tinted it all,
An illicit fruit it had been to me
Cherished it became then"

u knw these lines r so warm....

i must tell u..
its beautiful....... splendid...

cheers:)
Pallav

Diya said...

@ Pallav
Yeah, this warmth was intended before the cold indifference sets in...
Thanxx :)
Cheers :)

Anonymous said...

awesum creativity..it seems that rustles nd bustles of emotions get words under ur pen..all the best..carry on..

Chronicwriter said...

nallaaa irundhuchu.. kavidhai kavidhai

pramaadham

chriz

Cursed♪♫ said...

I loved this one. The picture is beautiful. I could kinda relate to your poem! Keep writing!
P.S: Mums no longer mad! :)

THE PHANTOM OF THE OPERA said...

lovely, wonderful and strangely resonating :) adored every bit of it :)

Walker said...

A ripe fruit to be enjoyed before it sours the lips over time.

Diya said...

@ Chandrima
Hmmm... Thanxx, hope I can carry on :)

Diya said...

@ Chronic writer
I learnt tamil true, but I dint get anything of what you wrote :( lol :P

Diya said...

@ Crursed
Glad to know you could relate, Just cant express how much I myself can relate to this ;) :P :)
P.S. Glad to know that. :)

Diya said...

@ Abhik
Thanxx, humbly accepting whatever you said. :P ;)
Thanxx for visiting :)

Diya said...

"A ripe fruit to be enjoyed before it sours the lips over time."
That was amazing dude... loved it.
Thanxx for visiting and commenting... will be visiting your blog soon :)
Do keep visiting :)

Amal Bose said...

soo beautifully written diya.. great work.. :-)

Diya said...

@ AB
Glad that you appreciated it :)
Thanxx :)