It was a delightful day love
You woke me up to the sun
Everything around was beautiful
But the dark cloud sustained.
Love and mutterings
You tinted it all,
An illicit fruit it had been to me
Cherished it became then.
Memories and memories you left me to.
It has been long since the colors paled
I saw them dilute in splotches
In saturated saline beads.
They drained you away, My life
Dreams ushered into reality.
Never had my world been so beautiful,
Never had I imagined it so ghastly.
22 comments:
Quite poetic, this one. Good job!!!
WOW Diya how d u write like this?
**I saw them dilute in splotches
In saturated saline beads.
Just awesome!
Keshi.
very nice write up diya :)...awesome expressions..
urs..hemu..
@ Brosereview
Thankxx :X :)
@ Keshi
Glad that you liked it :)
Thankx :)
@ Hemu
Thanxx :)
Wonderfully written, painted quite a picture in my head... cheers...
@ Arnab
ha ha, I have become quite a painter, isnt it? lol
Thanxx :)
"Love and mutterings
You tinted it all,
An illicit fruit it had been to me
Cherished it became then"
u knw these lines r so warm....
i must tell u..
its beautiful....... splendid...
cheers:)
Pallav
@ Pallav
Yeah, this warmth was intended before the cold indifference sets in...
Thanxx :)
Cheers :)
awesum creativity..it seems that rustles nd bustles of emotions get words under ur pen..all the best..carry on..
nallaaa irundhuchu.. kavidhai kavidhai
pramaadham
chriz
I loved this one. The picture is beautiful. I could kinda relate to your poem! Keep writing!
P.S: Mums no longer mad! :)
lovely, wonderful and strangely resonating :) adored every bit of it :)
A ripe fruit to be enjoyed before it sours the lips over time.
@ Chandrima
Hmmm... Thanxx, hope I can carry on :)
@ Chronic writer
I learnt tamil true, but I dint get anything of what you wrote :( lol :P
@ Crursed
Glad to know you could relate, Just cant express how much I myself can relate to this ;) :P :)
P.S. Glad to know that. :)
@ Abhik
Thanxx, humbly accepting whatever you said. :P ;)
Thanxx for visiting :)
"A ripe fruit to be enjoyed before it sours the lips over time."
That was amazing dude... loved it.
Thanxx for visiting and commenting... will be visiting your blog soon :)
Do keep visiting :)
soo beautifully written diya.. great work.. :-)
@ AB
Glad that you appreciated it :)
Thanxx :)
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