It is tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow…
As dwelling anticipation refuse to admit rout,
As the sweet memories of bygone dawn upon…
It has been long since you touched
The sacred holy heart tingling presence,
Now long since awaited for, pined without
Yearned for more as days slip past count…
Sweet memories stare bleak
As I stare at the now un trodden way
Once sprigged with the flowers of desire,
Saw it, felt it, loved it… no more is it now.
Though hopes refuse to fling the curse
The eyes bore to stare at the once cherished path.
As the thrush chants on its loveless song.
It is bygone and bygone and bygone…
22 comments:
I liked this. It took a while for me to let it sink in as I felt the disconnection on many occasions. If I'd not read it more than just twice, I'd have complained of it. But, frankly, it goes well with the message and the mood. Liked the way you've ended it as supposed to the way you've begun it. Great job!!! Keep writing!!!
hi..
u knw...
it took almost 20 minutes to understand the exact meaning...
beautiful piece...
clear message n transition of expressions.. kept me reading further n further...
Pallav
two words :beautiful,powerful
kaiku ettunadhu vaaiku ettalaiyaa?
vandhuttu poyiduchaaaa?
deep thoughts
good
chriz
@ Brosereview
Coming from you itz a great compliment :)
Thanxx :)
@ Pallav
Glad you liked it. Thankxx :)
@ Abhik
That was short and sweet :)
Thanxx :)
@ Chriz
Phir se Tamil...???? Mummmy..! :(
Nevertheless, kucch toh eng tha, thank God..! :P
Thanxx :)
Took me sometime to get to the exact meaning. But it's lovely.
Saw it, felt it, loved it… no more is it now. - Loved this line. Relates so much to me.
Also, amazing pik. If my piano was in a place like that, I would play it for hours :)
Take care!
Very nice post
Tomorrow never comes and yesterday is but a dream.
Today we live, love and die because it's always today when we are awake.
@ Cursed
Thanxx for liking it sis. Glad that you could relate to it. :)
Ha ha... you would have played the piano all throughout the day... eh? :P I myself liked the pic very much. :)
Thanxx. :)
@ Walked
Wonderful lines.
"Today is the night of the dream
That dawned yesterday
And will be inexistent tomorrow..."
Thanxx :)
loved it.. it was beautiful..
very deep and wonderful... :)
Was that english or its baap..?
I dont the meaning of many words in it...dekhna pada..then samjha ki ...kya hai aur kyu hai,.....
Very beautiful poem.... Sachi....muchchi..... :)
Likhte raho... :)
Profound :) Very well written :)
Commenting is an individual approach towards propelling a mass work initiative...! :P LOL True, though :)
intense poetry.. :) glad you liked the award.. please put it up here along with 'i am coz you are' and ' thanks for the sweet comments' awards as well..:D
@ AB
So very glad that you liked it, :)
Thanxx :)
@ Anubhav
I just couldent stop laughing after reading your comment ha ha :P
Sachi muchchi Thank you sooo much :)
Thanxx :)
@ Kido
Welcome to my blog :)
Thanxx for visiting and commenting :)
Glad that you liked it.
He he, don't you think that is true : :)
Thanxx :)
@ Kajal
Hey thank you so much for dropping by, following my blog and for the awards. :)
You rock :)
Thanxx. :)
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