You drool over the drone
You lose yourself in thoughts unknown,
Motionless in the corner you immerse yourself
Over worries hard to divulge to some un-known.
Hiding the drops that betray your composure
You set up the image of an eternal cynosure.
Think you, I am lost to notice
Your antics amidst the brawling thesis
Knew I not you to keep you forever?
Then why take chances testing me ever,
Come reveal me if anything bothers you slightly ever.
P.S. Today I complete twenty whole posts of mine, and am elated about it. :)
13 comments:
heyya!! "aim alone" was better, far more expressive, altho this one has better rhymes, but it not rhyme that makes a poem. Aim alone was a bit less rhyming, but I think it ws b8r...nua this 1 is nice too,but "aim alone" was nicer... nua keeps the good work up :)
@ Soulreaver
Thanks :)
But "Aim alone" had a different intention where as this is totally of another aim :P lol, I have some aim too...!!
nice lines...
you're a daily blogger..way to go!!! am way too lazy to post :P
Great poem there. I've always held poets in great esteem, mainly 'coz I'm not that good at it. Nicely written this one. Will be going through the rest of your blog too, cheers...
oh if all ur 20 posts r like these then i have really been missin out on some vy powerful words...
**Hiding the drops that betray your composure
loved this line...beautiful!!
@ John
yeah you can call it so!
Nd that ur lazy, I am pretty well aware of that :P
Neways, thanks :)
@ Arnab
Thanks, my pleasure dear... you are welcome :)
@ Arnab
Thanks for following my blog, Im obliged :P
@ mayz
Thanks :)
Nice poem Diya......nicely written.Even i love writing and i started my blog with the same intention but don't know when it turned into a foodie world :(
@ Aruna
Even though it has turned into a foodie world, it is "tempting"! :) :P
Some very strong lines here that really hit hard. Impressive! Keep them coming!
@ Brosreview
And can you believe I had to explain it to her!! :P
Thankxx :)
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