Eternal harmony played on taut
As I reinforced myself to face
The best of struggles raging within me
Blessed be the stars that have perked up
To witness me, and me alone
In this quest to freeing myself.
Two opposite horizons playing tough
None losing a chance to tease.
The constant struggle to keep up,
Whatever was left of the expectant
To stare at the blissful expecting.
Where have my senses fled
To somewhere unknown
Absence of ethics might have helped
Getting over the fight.
It’s shattering me.
Squeezing me Tight
Nothing left to give anymore
I’m sold, sold to my destiny.
Neither ethics nor senses helped
When I turned to give it a final shot.
3.15am, 22nd March, Sunday.
Will be away from blogging of a few days, will be out of station... will be missing yea... :(
15 comments:
That is quite thoughtful...
ur struggle with the very u..
good one....
wish i could write so good like you...
many posts of mine get the less of it just bcuz i don't put up a poem along with the post..:(
Good one..:)
utilitarianism rocks...
and the potic thoughts just flowed like honey
chriz
Well written..
infact earnestly n very thoughtfully written..
must tell u u hv a great sense of playing with words..
keep it up...
hv fun n nice day...
Cheers :)
Pallav
love the way u write Diya!
**Absence of ethics might have helped
Getting over the fight
WOW so profound!
hv a good trip and come bak soon!
Keshi.
@ Anubhav
I am flattered re :P
Thanks :)
@ Pallav
Yo Cheers :)
@ Chriz
Yeah, we and out chronic thoughts rock :P
Thanks dude :)
@ Keshi
I am back :)
Thankxx :)
looks like u wrote what i was feeling...
tc and be back soon
@ 007
I am back already :)
Yeah, these phases are common to many :)
Thankxx :)
yes we all go through these phases...but You can always climb a ladder, One step higher than the one you’ve stepped to.just getting in the shower is a step in itself.
Grow from here.
Take lessons, write.
Play.
Paint.
Get a second job, get out of debt, you can always get drunk.
Money makes this sad thing turn, you gotta make some or find another way.
Don’t explain, incorporate.
Forget calling people friends, just their names.
Don’t think too much about what they say.
Talk to yourself when someone’s listening.
Throw the grenade.
Eat the forbidden apple.
Live where no one wants to.
Embrace pain.
Live.
@ 007
Is this supposed to a advice? Then it is a very apt one to give me.
"Eat the forbidden apple.
Live where no one wants to.
Embrace pain.
Live."
These are the words that I had been looking forward to, as an advice from someone maybe. And you gave them to me. Itz the forbidden that forbids. Not the unforbidden that restricts. and it is indeed the forbidden that is the most interesting of the lot.And yes Friends tend to come closer, isn't it? Yo so its better not to let place have the distinction.Loved it, and took it. Wow, thanks for giving me some light. :)
well i get carried away sometimes...
forbidden has always been the most interesting and tempting ...
loved that you took it...
give me a wide smile now.
tc and have a nice day
@ oo7
Hey, I just left something for you in your blog as comment.
Please, check it out.
Well, I will not say that I have always loved and adored the forbidden... But yes, it does seem fascinating now. I have always been a very dutiful child, who has never strayed towards the forbidden... But I cant certainly predict the future...
A smile for you... he he.:)
Bye. Keep visiting.
that's the attitude girl.
stop making plans...be spontaneous.Life's will be too much fun.
No one can predict the future...As i said stop worrying ...start living.
i will be here whenever i can.
tc
BTW:i read you comment.But where should i reply to you.
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