It is only words and words
Words that rain out your memories
You seem to be non-existent,
But in my words you persist.
You have given way to this word-less emptiness
To which these expressions infused liveliness.
Are you their?
Or is it just my words
Fighting this lone quest
Towards asserting the reality…
That had one day created you
And are slaughtering you now.
Freezing you in these moments
While you breathe in my words.
They which instilled faith in me
Has now betrayed my trust.
Give life to my words
Their creation should not destroy you.
In their effort to chill time.
27 comments:
Decently fine!
PS: Here, "Are you their?"; I reckon it should be Are you there?
i missed 4 posts :O...went through all of them diya..
all were nice :)
this post is little different then i expected with the title :)...but good words :)..
urs..hemu..
p.s: u missed an award in my blog :)..
wht i think it is....
leave it
ok now again beautifully piece...
with awesome words
what to say
i m wordless....
Pallav
beautiful u today tomorrow...:)eta akta ad er tagilne dedicated 2 u...:)
wonderful work diya..
brilliant!!
keep writing :)
good day
That was wonderfull.......
A first timer to your blog and looks like a regular reader from now.....:-)
Really love the template.......
I really loved the following lines,
You seem to be non-existent,
But in my words you persist.
You have given way to this word-less emptiness
To which these expressions infused liveliness.
Cheers,
Enjoyed it.
@ Brosreview
Ummm... I guess that was, and thank you for pointing that out I`ll jus check that. :)
Thank you. :)
@ Hemanth
That was sooooo sweet of you dear :)Thanx for reading all the posts, I`ll definitely check it out. :)
Thank you. :)
@ Pallav
Glad that you liked it. :)
Thanxx :)
@ C
hmmm... I get it. Thats nice and the same goes out to you too dear. Love u always :)
Thanxx :)
@ Ab
Hey thanxx for following my blog. :)
Glad that you liked it. :)
Thank you. :)
@ David
First things first :P Welcome to my blog and thanx for visiting nd commenting :)
I jus checked out ur blog, but... itz is only sports out their :( and I don't understand mucch of that stuff! :(
Nevertheless, glad that you liked it :)
Do keep visiting. :)
Thanxx :)
words- the song came into my mind now
gotten over your crush ?
I like your blog, its got candy on the side panel
Wow!!
I am really bad at poetry and really admire ppl who can come up wit stuff like this..Loved it :)
Actually, i also write humour....but now due to the T20 WC, I'm concentrating on cricket...
:)
Cheers;
Through out the poem you asked your someone to give worth to the "WORDS" of yours...
Instead asking him to give worth to your feelings would have been a best way i guess..
In fact i wrote a post on this theme...if you have time, go for words in my blog..
But i liked the poem otherwise , as lot of effort is being put in portraying the pain..
Cheers
Gablu can be wrong...:-)
How often it happens that someone gives meaning to our words and the other times our words give meaning to someone.
Beautifully structured. Me likey. :)
@ Chriz
Lol :P
Thanxx :)
@ John
I don't know :(
@ Emaan
Yeah, it has and you are indeed as chweet as that cutie :)
Thanxx and welcome to my blog. :)
@ Shanu
Hey welcome to my blog and thanxx for visiting and commenting. :)
Glad that you liked it.
Thanxx :)
@ David
Please return to humor soon :P
@ Anubhav
** "Through out the poem you asked your someone to give worth to the "WORDS" of yours..."
Nops I dint ask anybody 2 give imp to my words, I asked them to give life to the otherwise lifeless words, which have the capacity to create and break illusions as well. :)
I had seen your post, but I had written this long long ago :)
Gablu misjudged :P
Thanxx :)
@ Aniket
Yeah verrryyy true :P
Thanxx Mr. Perfectionist. :P
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