Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.

Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.
I'm not a perfect person, But I never meant to do those things; And so I have to say before I go, That I just want myself to know. I've found out a reason for me,; To change who I used to be A reason to start over new, and the reason is you. I've found a reason to show, A side of me you didn't know; A reason for all that I do, Before I let you go...

Friday, June 5, 2009

Forever.


I open the treasured box

Take your wishes in my hand

Turn them over, feel them against my skin

I put them back inside again

And close the box gently.

Everyday.

Everyday.

 

I unbolt the door to the path,

Intertwine my fingers with your memories

Feel them as they brush against my warm cheek

We walk together for sometime,

I bid you good bye and close the door behind me.

Everyday.

Everyday.

 

I dress up everyday

Just as you would have liked me to be.

I wait with flowers as the hour of your arrival passes by

I wait patiently and envision your smiling face as you glimpse me

Then I undress and close the door as you forget to turn up.

Everyday.

Everyday.

 

I dream the dreams over and over again

The ones you gave me

There are so many that I think they will last me forever

Until you think of gifting me new ones again,

I will cherish them

Forever.

Forever…




Please do read and comment on my efforts if you find this post popping up anywhere near you :P

24 comments:

Walker said...

Love is a powerful prison

Brosreview said...

Good job!

Chriz said...

new template i guess..

and you are hitting sixes continuously with your poems..

dressing up and undressing part depicted the sad longingness.. too good

comfortably numb said...

it's an endless path which u tread.
btw, forever is a lie Diya...trust me:(
amazing words...beautiful poetry:)

Aniket said...

strong emotions flow from these words. Its a tough road to walk on.

Nicely done. But I hope its a work of fiction.

ANWESA said...

its beautiful!!!!!!!!!

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

First of all i liked your 3 column template...its really good...

On a serious note , i liked this poem very much...

especially that "everyday everyday" thing in every stanza....

Its not a easy task to do so, despite knowing that you have to maintain the theme chosen through out the poem..

Keep writing..

Cheers

Diya said...

@ Walker
hmmm... guess it is :)
Thankxx :)

Diya said...

@ Brosreview
Thanxx dear :)

Diya said...

@ Chriz
he he... thats interesting :P
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Comfortably numb
I dont know re...
Thankxx nevertheless :)

Diya said...

@ Aniket
Yeah, it is.
Well, everybody's fiction is somebody`s reality :)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Anwesa
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Anubhav
Thanxx for liking the template and the poem as well :)
Thanxx dear :)

Priya Joyce said...

beautiful...and wat love does to a person is also beautiful :)

Diya said...

@ Priya Joyce
Yeah, it is indeed beautiful ironically! :)
Thanxx for visiting and commenting. :)
Welcome to my blog, do keep visiting.
Thank you. :)

Aditya said...

Wow! that was a beauty.
It made me enter into a world of my own full of memories.
It was really great!

Bozo said...

i'm in love now....for the millionth time that is!

absolute!

hary!! said...

swell!!!

Vijay Kumar Sappatti said...

This is really very good work of words. The poem is very impressive and has the shades of emotions which are expressed beautifully..

Congratulations for this poem.. this is expressed so naturally... that I am speachless....

Pls visit my blog for my new poem .

http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/2009/05/blog-post_18.html

Regards

Vijay

Diya said...

@ Aditya
Hey Welcome to my blog. Thanx for visiting and commenting. Glad that you liked it. :)Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Bozo
Back after a longg time. :)
Thanxx dude. :)

Diya said...

@ Hary
Thanxx dude. Thanxx for visiting and commenting. Welcome to my blog, do keep visiting. :)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Vijay
Those was praises! Thanxx for them :)
Will visit your blog soon.
Thanxx for visiting and commenting :)
Welcome to my blog and do keep visiting. :)
Thanxx :)