Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.

Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.
I'm not a perfect person, But I never meant to do those things; And so I have to say before I go, That I just want myself to know. I've found out a reason for me,; To change who I used to be A reason to start over new, and the reason is you. I've found a reason to show, A side of me you didn't know; A reason for all that I do, Before I let you go...

Monday, June 8, 2009

Infusing Life in You...





















It is only words and words

Words that rain out your memories

You seem to be non-existent,

But in my words you persist.

You have given way to this word-less emptiness

To which these expressions infused liveliness.

Are you their?

Or is it just my words

Fighting this lone quest

Towards asserting the reality…

That had one day created you

And are slaughtering you now.

Freezing you in these moments

While you breathe in my words.

They which instilled faith in me

Has now betrayed my trust.

Give life to my words

Their creation should not destroy you.

In their effort to chill time.




Please do read and comment on my efforts if you find this post popping up anywhere near you :P

27 comments:

Brosreview said...

Decently fine!

PS: Here, "Are you their?"; I reckon it should be Are you there?

Hemanth Potluri said...

i missed 4 posts :O...went through all of them diya..

all were nice :)

this post is little different then i expected with the title :)...but good words :)..

urs..hemu..

p.s: u missed an award in my blog :)..

Pallav said...

wht i think it is....
leave it
ok now again beautifully piece...
with awesome words

what to say
i m wordless....
Pallav

Anonymous said...

beautiful u today tomorrow...:)eta akta ad er tagilne dedicated 2 u...:)

Amal Bose said...

wonderful work diya..
brilliant!!

keep writing :)
good day

Christopher Poshin David said...

That was wonderfull.......

A first timer to your blog and looks like a regular reader from now.....:-)

Really love the template.......

I really loved the following lines,
You seem to be non-existent,

But in my words you persist.

You have given way to this word-less emptiness

To which these expressions infused liveliness.

Cheers,

Enjoyed it.

Diya said...

@ Brosreview
Ummm... I guess that was, and thank you for pointing that out I`ll jus check that. :)
Thank you. :)

Diya said...

@ Hemanth
That was sooooo sweet of you dear :)Thanx for reading all the posts, I`ll definitely check it out. :)
Thank you. :)

Diya said...

@ Pallav
Glad that you liked it. :)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ C
hmmm... I get it. Thats nice and the same goes out to you too dear. Love u always :)
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Ab
Hey thanxx for following my blog. :)
Glad that you liked it. :)
Thank you. :)

Diya said...

@ David
First things first :P Welcome to my blog and thanx for visiting nd commenting :)
I jus checked out ur blog, but... itz is only sports out their :( and I don't understand mucch of that stuff! :(
Nevertheless, glad that you liked it :)
Do keep visiting. :)
Thanxx :)

Chriz said...

words- the song came into my mind now

john said...

gotten over your crush ?

Emaan said...

I like your blog, its got candy on the side panel

Shanu said...

Wow!!

I am really bad at poetry and really admire ppl who can come up wit stuff like this..Loved it :)

Christopher Poshin David said...

Actually, i also write humour....but now due to the T20 WC, I'm concentrating on cricket...

:)

Cheers;

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Through out the poem you asked your someone to give worth to the "WORDS" of yours...

Instead asking him to give worth to your feelings would have been a best way i guess..

In fact i wrote a post on this theme...if you have time, go for words in my blog..

But i liked the poem otherwise , as lot of effort is being put in portraying the pain..

Cheers

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Gablu can be wrong...:-)

Aniket said...

How often it happens that someone gives meaning to our words and the other times our words give meaning to someone.

Beautifully structured. Me likey. :)

Diya said...

@ Chriz
Lol :P
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ John
I don't know :(

Diya said...

@ Emaan
Yeah, it has and you are indeed as chweet as that cutie :)
Thanxx and welcome to my blog. :)

Diya said...

@ Shanu
Hey welcome to my blog and thanxx for visiting and commenting. :)
Glad that you liked it.
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ David
Please return to humor soon :P

Diya said...

@ Anubhav
** "Through out the poem you asked your someone to give worth to the "WORDS" of yours..."

Nops I dint ask anybody 2 give imp to my words, I asked them to give life to the otherwise lifeless words, which have the capacity to create and break illusions as well. :)

I had seen your post, but I had written this long long ago :)
Gablu misjudged :P

Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Aniket
Yeah verrryyy true :P
Thanxx Mr. Perfectionist. :P