Lying on the edge senses trail.
The sultry afternoon dawns forth as,
Tripping over the thread I tread
I break the spell that created ‘today’.
Tomorrow is the day, maybe with no today.
The obscure designs magnify
The ones I just noticed now…
Thirty barcodes to the bottle
Some crazy patterns on the palate
The colored stones on the mosaic
Layers of dust on the sill.
They were their yesterday
But my wits then in witty consorts
Diverted the gaze.
When emotions fail to comfort
To them I return
Forever they had stayed
Anticipating my attention.
They come to play now
For you had they not forsaken
They the silent admirers.
Still, I reread the long messages
To whom I had been addicted
Written so that you would stop by,
They are still their
Awaiting your attention
Animate under my care.
I burned them up today
To ease the burns of yesterday.
Nothing is left of you now
Save charred black smudges.
The inanimate have come to life now,
You will be the one
For whom I lived eternally.
But never the one
I died for.
This is my last post this month. I am taking a long sabbatical from this place, this city, this forlorn existence. Something seems to have come over me causing me to be constantly distracted from my typical self. Will miss the space, will miss you guys, will miss the city and my friends. Hope to see you again on return. Till then good-bye, take care.
I wont be able to stay here for C`s birthday, hope she enjoys a lot. Many many happy returns of the day to you in advance dear, and a verrrryyyy Happpy Birthday. :)
25 comments:
The first half is all right. From the second half, it grows stronger and stronger. Well done! Keep writing!!!
PS: Enjoy your break! Everyone needs one once in a while!
loved the poem..
and come back soon, we r gonna miss u..
take care :)
beautiful word expressions diya :)...
btw did i say i so love ur header :)...
and come back soon diya blogsville will miss ya :)..
urs..hemu..
strong emotions displayed in a controlled pattern..enjoy.
sometimes ur posts go rite over my head :(
anyway u tk cr...come back soon
happy birthday to C.. but who is C?
come back soon
"You will be the one
For whom I lived eternally.
But never the one
I died for."
An apt end or perhaps a new beginning for the wonderful flow of thoughts. I hope it isn't visceral.
Do find your way back here. :)
Take it easy, take care and be back when u really miss us ;-)
*HUGZ*
Keshi.
Nice blog!
mein aai aur tum gai..nyways
come back soon
yeah poem was good, but thoda kam samajh aai
Pretty cool. I hope you come back soon :-)
Nice post.
I hope you get some rest and find some peace or what you're looking for.
See you when you come back all refreashed
I am tired of saying "you play with words very well" and i am left with very less adjectives...
It is very beautiful and the fact is your vocabulary is far better than mine :-)
Cheers
I left a comment at last post of yours..
Cheers
nice poem
Nice post.
Hope you feel better soon.
T
loved the poem ...
return soon........
Have a refreshing break.. :)
Thanks a ton :) Glad you liked it!!
Yours good too!! You fine now?? Check out my new poem!
get back soon!!!
poem was real abstract!!!
i absolutely loved it...
more the second half..
esp after entry of wife
enjoyed it
nice post keep it up
see my blog also its a new one
keep blogging
BTW...I wish to tag you...and here is it at my post!
Gablu is waiting for your arrival :-)
@ Anubhav
Oye Gablu, I am back. :)
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