I open the treasured box
Take your wishes in my hand
Turn them over, feel them against my skin
I put them back inside again
And close the box gently.
Everyday.
Everyday.
I unbolt the door to the path,
Intertwine my fingers with your memories
Feel them as they brush against my warm cheek
We walk together for sometime,
I bid you good bye and close the door behind me.
Everyday.
Everyday.
I dress up everyday
Just as you would have liked me to be.
I wait with flowers as the hour of your arrival passes by
I wait patiently and envision your smiling face as you glimpse me
Then I undress and close the door as you forget to turn up.
Everyday.
Everyday.
I dream the dreams over and over again
The ones you gave me
There are so many that I think they will last me forever
Until you think of gifting me new ones again,
I will cherish them
Forever.
Forever…
24 comments:
Love is a powerful prison
Good job!
new template i guess..
and you are hitting sixes continuously with your poems..
dressing up and undressing part depicted the sad longingness.. too good
it's an endless path which u tread.
btw, forever is a lie Diya...trust me:(
amazing words...beautiful poetry:)
strong emotions flow from these words. Its a tough road to walk on.
Nicely done. But I hope its a work of fiction.
its beautiful!!!!!!!!!
First of all i liked your 3 column template...its really good...
On a serious note , i liked this poem very much...
especially that "everyday everyday" thing in every stanza....
Its not a easy task to do so, despite knowing that you have to maintain the theme chosen through out the poem..
Keep writing..
Cheers
@ Walker
hmmm... guess it is :)
Thankxx :)
@ Brosreview
Thanxx dear :)
@ Chriz
he he... thats interesting :P
Thanxx :)
@ Comfortably numb
I dont know re...
Thankxx nevertheless :)
@ Aniket
Yeah, it is.
Well, everybody's fiction is somebody`s reality :)
Thanxx :)
@ Anwesa
Thanxx :)
@ Anubhav
Thanxx for liking the template and the poem as well :)
Thanxx dear :)
beautiful...and wat love does to a person is also beautiful :)
@ Priya Joyce
Yeah, it is indeed beautiful ironically! :)
Thanxx for visiting and commenting. :)
Welcome to my blog, do keep visiting.
Thank you. :)
Wow! that was a beauty.
It made me enter into a world of my own full of memories.
It was really great!
i'm in love now....for the millionth time that is!
absolute!
swell!!!
This is really very good work of words. The poem is very impressive and has the shades of emotions which are expressed beautifully..
Congratulations for this poem.. this is expressed so naturally... that I am speachless....
Pls visit my blog for my new poem .
http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/2009/05/blog-post_18.html
Regards
Vijay
@ Aditya
Hey Welcome to my blog. Thanx for visiting and commenting. Glad that you liked it. :)Thanxx :)
@ Bozo
Back after a longg time. :)
Thanxx dude. :)
@ Hary
Thanxx dude. Thanxx for visiting and commenting. Welcome to my blog, do keep visiting. :)
Thanxx :)
@ Vijay
Those was praises! Thanxx for them :)
Will visit your blog soon.
Thanxx for visiting and commenting :)
Welcome to my blog and do keep visiting. :)
Thanxx :)
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