Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.

Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.
I'm not a perfect person, But I never meant to do those things; And so I have to say before I go, That I just want myself to know. I've found out a reason for me,; To change who I used to be A reason to start over new, and the reason is you. I've found a reason to show, A side of me you didn't know; A reason for all that I do, Before I let you go...

Sunday, March 29, 2009

You thought about it not...



A million burns on my soul.

But still it is you, My soul.

My soul for mine is enough.

The million cuts on you

That inflicted pains

The stained eyes,

Which no reflections catch.

It was a blue moon night

My love, you left me thus

Howling with grief.

Know you not me?

My love, left me to the pain.

I gave you up myself,

But you gave me up.

The blue moon smirked.

You went away

Leaving me disfigured.

The blue moon smiled

A crooked smile.

You looked at it not,

You understood it not,

You thought about it not!

 

What is that…?

The strange crooked figure

Lying motionless

Under the blue moon.

I stopped him,

To look at the creature

Withering in pain.

Alas! It is you my love!

How?

The blue moon smiled

A avenge reeking smile.

You looked at it not,

You understood it not,

You thought about it not!

 

2 comments:

Brosreview said...

The second half is well-written. You could polish the first half. No offence meant.

Diya said...

@ AJ
Ummm... I`ll try, these were some of the 1st I tried when I first knew that I could write :)
I`ll definitely try :)