Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.

Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.
I'm not a perfect person, But I never meant to do those things; And so I have to say before I go, That I just want myself to know. I've found out a reason for me,; To change who I used to be A reason to start over new, and the reason is you. I've found a reason to show, A side of me you didn't know; A reason for all that I do, Before I let you go...

Saturday, July 18, 2009

Reason.


Offer him a world to arouse;

Give it, give it, give it now,

It’s the end unless you unburden

The nights off its shoulder.


How long will it turn back?

Pull it, pull it, pull it up

Don’t let it sink back again

Down, down into the dark hole.


Its turning, turning turning,

Stop it, stop it and let it stand;

But let it burn ablaze to customary

Unless it gets its past back again.


How long will I suffer this way?

Forever returning back to the darkness;

Losing you always on the way.

How long, how long will you take my reason away?

Please do read and comment on my efforts if you find this post popping up anywhere near you :P

15 comments:

Brosreview said...

Reasoning; yes, it can be hard at times. I like this one as it conveys the difficulty quite well. Keep writing!!!

Walker said...

The light is there for your to turn on and off.
The darkness is the light of night and not to be feared but cherished as you see more in the darkness than you do in the light of day.
So let you fingers search for what you are looking for even if its just a light switch

Randeep said...

So u gave it.
And u pulled it.
It couldn't make it as past.
You will suffer as long as u write about it..

But the reason.. Do others have reasons..!

Time.. It can help rejoining or forgetting...

Anonymous said...

wow!!jaata!

Aniket said...

Wow... loved the structure there. The repetitions struck hard and gave whole new meaning to the poem. I just hope its not visceral.

Nothing is permanent in the world, not even sadness. But the trance of ambiguity is one of the worst situations to be in.

Strong writeup.

comfortably numb said...

Some questions are better not asked...their answers could be harsher.

comfortably numb said...

u r awarded n tagged at my space...chck it out!!!

Gerry Boyd said...

Bravo!

Diya said...

@ Brosereview
Hey thank you. :)

Diya said...

@ Walker
This is just a new string of thoughts that you gave me...
Thankxx :)

Diya said...

@ Randeep
I just don't know!
Thankxx nevertheless.

Diya said...

@ C
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Aniket
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Cn
Thanxx dude. :)

Diya said...

@ Gerry
Thanxx :)
Do visit again. :)