Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.

Insanely sane… Surviving qualmless.
I'm not a perfect person, But I never meant to do those things; And so I have to say before I go, That I just want myself to know. I've found out a reason for me,; To change who I used to be A reason to start over new, and the reason is you. I've found a reason to show, A side of me you didn't know; A reason for all that I do, Before I let you go...

Saturday, August 22, 2009

Wanderings on and on...


Her thoughts ramble on and on as she lies still. The wind caresses her face as the heavy smell of sweat does to her body. Something occupies the room, she is not alone. Dazed she stares at the ceiling and tries to focus. Everything seems to come in pairs, there are two fans, and there are two lights. She lifts her hands to her eyes, the light is too harsh. But the hand seems to split, she can view everything in-between! She drops the hand wearily to her side. It hits something and with a noisy clatter something falls to the floor. She sits up hurriedly coming out of her stance. She had been in the house continuously for three days. The ending had been harsh. Communicating has become difficult for the last few days. Feeling she would have been better off as dumb rather than face every embarrassing situation silently, she had gradually starting closing everything within her. It would probably be better alone, inside. She fell back on the bed. Bygone peeped in again through the door. Seeing her lying on the bed again she whispered to Present, “You can rest, she will be preoccupied with me for some time now.”. And her thoughts ambled on and on…




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10 comments:

sawan said...

i liked the intro of bygone and present. made it unique and lovely!

Brosreview said...

A fine start and end! Some clear reflections here!

Saim said...

love the ending lines...the past is always attractive and addictive...once in a reverie, it's tough to break free!!!

God...will u remove this word verification thingy....no one's gonna spam here yaar:D

Anonymous said...

the bleak pictures of past lingers in my head...i dont' feel like counting on them yet i had to..wht is dat dat keeps on juggling in my head even when i m not talking wid anybody no not even wid myself..i feel like caressing over my tainted past...inspite of hating it why is it so tht i feel like eternilizing myself in those memories..do i stand where i need 2 stand?do i face wht i need 2 face...as my loniliness hovers arnd the silent street of my mind i succumb 2 a part of me which i hven't interacted earlier..the daub of colours on canvas remains silent inspite of being so expressive..god knows ki bhat likhlam bt pore etai mathae elo..jaata..100 yrs of solitude porar por ei communication problem akdom jaata..

joie de vivre said...

this looks incomplete..undefined end..

Diya said...

@ Sawan
thanxx so mucch! :)

Diya said...

@ Brosreview
Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Sain
I guess so :P

I am so happy that something ugged you atlast ;) :P

Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ C
Thats stunning!
Tui j keno likhis na k jaane?
Nevertheless, maybe only you can unnerstand what others never can :P
Thanxx [You keep me burning] :P :)

Thanxx :)

Diya said...

@ Joie
That was the intended effect... You can complete it then! :)

Thanxx nevertheless! :)